Thursday, November 20, 2014

Comments for Nathan and Rishat: Brooklyn Bridge

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15 comments:

  1. You guys did a really good job explaining and talking about it your topic and it was really great. I love your video and pictures as well. I would have talked a bit more about how it was built, and how long it took. other than that, great job!

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  2. I thought you guys did a really good job on your presentation. I learned a lot about the brooklyn bridge like that it is 6016 feet in length. You both knew your topic and presented it very well.

    Maybe next time talk more about facts and organize the information better! but over all it was very good and i liked how you even included pictures that you took when you were there.

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  3. I loved the pictures you guys shared, it was nice to see you making a connection to the Brooklyn Bridge with your person life, it was relatable and the information was interesting. I will say that you guys should try to be more energetic and engage the audience more, perhaps being more organized would help with your presentation quality. Other than that, great job!

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  5. i really like your presentation. it was great topic to learn more about Brooklyn Bridge. i loved the pictures Rishat use on his presentation for experience Brooklyn Bridge. it was great presentation.

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  6. I thought your presentation was good. you were even able to incorporate you own personal experience with the bridge which only added strength to the wealth of knowledge that you were sharing with us.

    My only critique would have been on the PowerPoint slide that was titled NOW was on the cluttered side compared to the other slides. Nonetheless it did not subtract from your overall presentation. Great job. :-)

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  7. You guys did a great job, I thought your powerpoint was very informative, and I especially enjoyed how you related your topic to your personal life. I felt very engaged and you guys did a great job presenting your information.

    The only thing I would add would maybe be to look at your notecards a little less. At times it felt like you might have been reading off of your notecard. But all in all a great presentation and very well organized.

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  8. I thought you guys did a good job. You had a lot of information and it was cool how you added your own pictures from personal experience in it!

    The only thing I would of changed is just if you talked a little more about how it was built and how long it took. Other then that, great information and you guys seemed to really know your topic!

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  9. I thought you guys did a good job.Learned information that I never even knew about the Brooklyn Bridge, and I liked the personal pictures that were shown. The only comment I would say is that it felt like you were both disconnected from the presentation at times, but other than that, good job!

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  10. I ended up learning a lot of information on the bridge. I think you guys did a really great job giving us the facts and who made it. I didn't know that it took 14 years to build the bridge. The only criticism I would give would be to maybe add in what people originally thought of the construction. Good work though.

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  11. You guys did a great job on your presentation! I liked how you personalized it by adding your own photos. The history and background was very interesting to learn about. It's amazing to grasp how many people died in the production. Great job!

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  12. I actually enjoyed this presentation a lot! I thought it was really interesting to hear that 600 people helped build the bridge itself, and they only got paid 2 measly dollars a day! I was quite taken by that information.

    I think you guys did a wonderful job, but maybe for the next presentation you guys could both work on selling your presentation even further! I felt that most of the presentation was spoken in monotone. So maybe you guys could be even more enthusiastic towards the next presentation that you have. I could also sense that you guys were a little nervous during your presentation because Rishat mentioned that he was tripping over his words. But you guys shouldn't feel nervous at all! SO just relax next time, and everything will fall into place :) Overall though, you guys did wonderful work!

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  13. I thought it was cool how you guys had a lot of interesting facts about things that have happened on the Brooklyn Bridge. How there were 1,000 trips a day made by ferry's before the bridge was there. I also thought it was fun how you told the story about John Augustus dying from nerve damage. One thing that you guys could work on for the next presentation is maybe explaining more about how the bridge changed things specifically and the kind of work that was put in to build it. You touched on these things briefly but I think a little more explaining would have been good.

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  14. I thought your presentation was well done! The powerpoint was appealing and the video was a good touch as well. Loved the animation you included too. It was breath taking! One thing I noticed was that there was a lot of note card use. Other than that I enjoyed learning about the bridge!

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  15. I thought your guy's presentation was very well put together! I liked all of the pictures and how you guys showed the bridge today compared to what it was like in the past. Just one constructive piece of advice, make sure when you make note cards, only use them as a reference. Just look at them only when it is necessary! Good job honestly though.

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