Thursday, November 20, 2014

Comments for Fathia and Asiya: Manhatten Project

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13 comments:

  1. You really seemed to know your topic and you seemed really interested in it as well, which is great. Also I loved the video it was interesting and I think it really explained your topic well.
    I would give Asiya more things to say, but other than that, it was great.

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  2. I enjoyed your presentation! I did not know much about the Manhatten Project before this. You guys really knew your information and did not even need note cards that much. I thought your powerpoint was very good and also i liked the video you chose because it was not too long and not too short.

    Maybe next time split up the information better so you both have equal tim to talk. But overall it was really good!

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  3. I really enjoyed that you two didn't need to look at your notecards and knew your topic inside and out, it really showed. It made it really nice to listen to. The information was nicely organized. I would say that you two should have had equal amounts of time to present this topic and it seemed very one sided.

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  4. I felt like I learned a lot from your presentation. I had heard of little boy before but had no idea that about the deep process that it took to make it for that time period. You both very knowledgeable about your topic which showed in your presentation.

    My only critique would have been there was just two parts during the presentation where you both hit a detailed part of the presentation and you both spoke a little on the fast side and it was unclear at first as to what you were saying.

    Overall a great presentation. :-)

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  5. You guys did a great job! You were both great presenters, it is really easy to stay engaged and interested when you are not just reading facts off a notecard, and you guys understood and knew your information very well and actually presented it and explained the story and science behind this topic. Great job!

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  6. I enjoyed your guys presentation. I had little to no information of this topic before you guys shared it. You guys seemed like you knew what you were talking about. The only thing I would have changed is if you could of spoke up more cause sometimes it was hard to hear you but other then that, great job!

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  7. I really enjoyed your presentation, and all of the facts that you gave. It was an interesting topic, and I was surprised at how much I actually learned about the Manhattan Project.The only comment that I would have to make is maybe you could have divided the presentation up into equal parts, but that is all. Overall great job!

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  8. I liked your guys' presentation a lot because you were very clear when presenting the material to the class. I liked when you guys talked about the fact that Albert Einstein sent a letter to President Roosevelt about the construction of the atom bomb! That's one of the things that I thought was the most important while listening.

    I was very impressed in how you guys presented the depictions of the "Little Man" and the "Fat Man". The video that you chose to help shed some light on your topic proved to be very helpful too! Overall, I liked the way you guys presented your material. The only thing that I think would've been helpful is if Asiya spoke out a little bit more so everyone could hear her a little better. Nice work on your presentation!

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  9. I actually had no idea what the Manhattan Project was, so this presentation was an amazing introduction to the topic. The information was organized very well.

    Although dominance is very important to a presentation, I feel like Fathia overpowered Asiya a lot during it. Other than that, it was awesome!

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  10. You guys did a really good job! I've learned about this event in school, but not in depth. You guys did a great job teaching us, you picked very good main points. I also thought that the video was good because it created a visual for us. One thing that could have helped the presentation was telling us about how we, the people in the US, felt about this. Or how people that lived through this tragedy are because of it, and their experience. That would have been neat to hear about.

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  11. I thought you guys did well on your presentation. You really understood your subject. The video was a nice touch too. I noticed that one person spoke more than the other so next time I would try to equal it out a little better. Other than that, well done.

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  12. I loved the pictures that yoou all used in your powerpoint. They were very powerful and left a lasting impression on the veiwer. The Einstein quote was also a great addition that I really enjoyed. I fet the presentation was sped through however and was at times a little hard to follow.

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  13. In my opinion you guys had the most interesting presentation. I really enjoyed learning about this project and the types of bombs constructed back then. Coming in I wasn't really sure what to expect simply because I was unaware of truly what the project was. Now I have a clear cut idea and that is all thanks to both of you. One thing though, maybe balance out the talking. I felt like Fathia did a lot of the talking and explaining. Good work though all around!

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