Thursday, November 20, 2014

Comments for Bryson and Cameron: Thomas Jefferson

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14 comments:

  1. I thought you guys did really well and kept us very interested, simply because of the humor you guys put in. You guys really seemed to know your facts and information along with the background information.
    I would have added a video but it was great!

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  2. I thought your presentation was really good. You did not just talk about thomas jefferson as a president but also other things he did. I did not know that he was a farmer. I found it unique that he died on July 4.

    Maybe next time you can add a short little video. But other than that it was really good and it seemed like you both knew your topic

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  3. You guys were engaging and fun to watch, you had awesome information and knew what you were talking about. I like that you didn't refer back to your note cards. I would say that making a comparison to Hilary Clinton may have been a bit of a stretch and I think you could have found a better comparison to modern day, or maybe you could have come up with a call to action. Aside from being more creative you guys did well!

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  4. that was nice presentation you guys did. i like how you guys use famous quotation. that was very interest history. the only things, i will say was , you could found more about information when he came president of United States

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  5. I enjoyed your presentation. I found it to be very informative and detailed. Yet, full of humor and wit. I felt like you two really studied your subject and worked hard to bring lesser known facts about our 3rd president of the United States.

    My only criticism was there just a less than a handful of times during the presentation were I felt that that was a certain string of words was being repeated multiple times. I figured it was out of nervousness though. Overall good job. :-)

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  6. You guys did a good job on your presentation for Thomas Jefferson. It wasn't just all facts when you presented it, you made it your own and both of you knew what you were talking about.
    The only thing I would of done is maybe added a small video. Other then that you guys did really well!

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  7. I thought you guys did a great job, and your presentation was very humorous at times. I learned a lot of new things about Thomas Jefferson, and it was very well put together. The only comment that I would have to make is that maybe you could have explained the comparison at the end better, but you both did a great job!

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  8. I think you guys did a great job on this presentation. You guys were well informed and all your information was clear and concise. You guys were also humorous which made the presentation was captivating. Overall, really great job.

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  9. I thought your presentation was very good and informative! I liked how you emphasized on the kind of writer he was. I didn't know he was such a crazed farmer, good to learn! You both kept us entertained and overall I thought it was very good!

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  10. I thought that your presentation was very informative! I liked how you mentioned the fact that Thomas Jefferson was, "silent, but deadly". I thought that was important to know because it followed him throughout his whole life! I also like how you guys included the information about his slave Sally. I never knew that he had "relations" with a slave. I thought that was really interesting.

    Overall, I really liked the flow of your guys' presentation, and you both seemed very confident. I also enjoyed how humorous the presentation was too! It helped open up the room a little bit, and i think it helped as a great strategy for keeping the attention of the class! Nice job!

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  11. I really enjoyed how much enthusiasm you showed toward the subject of Thomas Jefferson. It didn't seem at all like you only did this for an English project. It was a very enjoyable presentation.

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  12. You guys did a really good job. I thought that the three parts of Thomas Jefferson's life that you talked about were really interesting. I don't think many people knew about how he had a love for farming. Adding in how he was known for is writing, not speaking was really important. To make the presentation better maybe you guys could have shared to us specific parts of why his writing was so "deadly" I think that people would have found that interesting.

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  13. I thought you guys did a great job on your presentation. I noticed immediately that you guys knew your information and used the notecards only when needed. I thought this was the best presentation so far.

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  14. I thought you guys did a great job about speaking about all of Jefferson's past expirences that many people didn't know as much about. However I thought your comparison between Hillary Clinton and Jefferson was kinda weak.

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