tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post8746440174017433956..comments2023-03-25T05:43:55.623-07:00Comments on 10:30 Writing to Discover and Share: Pettit Poem by RishatMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-35518773433512340342014-09-11T10:11:43.027-07:002014-09-11T10:11:43.027-07:00Your poem was very enjoyable to read! I liked the ...Your poem was very enjoyable to read! I liked the line where you said "is August 7th some kind of dare devil day." A good question, considering his idea was very risky. Goodwork!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03097846621636997716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-62625241980025457992014-09-11T09:21:14.850-07:002014-09-11T09:21:14.850-07:00Rishat, your poem was definitely comical for me. M...Rishat, your poem was definitely comical for me. My favorite line would have to be "Is it a bird or a plane?" I immediately thought of Superman. In retrospect, I would think that a lot of New Yorkers would react just like that when they first saw him up there. Like something out of a comic book. The unexpected line of "dancing like monkey" brought a smile to my face as I could visually see that happening while he was on the wire. I thought you did a good job. Amanda Braceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08165666418001601480noreply@blogger.com