tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post4889865028603723746..comments2023-03-25T05:43:55.623-07:00Comments on 10:30 Writing to Discover and Share: Philippe Petite tribute poem by MackenzieMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-46882268226572040382014-09-16T06:59:46.591-07:002014-09-16T06:59:46.591-07:00Hi Mackenzie! I really liked you poem, it was ev...Hi Mackenzie! I really liked you poem, it was every interest poem and creative. also you create beautiful tittle in your poem. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06340507203481636539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-17973090125759171372014-09-11T09:09:06.862-07:002014-09-11T09:09:06.862-07:00I really enjoyed reading your poem, it's so ea...I really enjoyed reading your poem, it's so easy to follow which created great pictures for me of Phillippe's story. I thought your last two lines were very powerful for how simple they are, it ends with a very bold tone that comes off as inspirational. Great poem.Madisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10496194199349165931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-89744845484903300562014-09-11T09:04:55.052-07:002014-09-11T09:04:55.052-07:00Hey Mackenzie! I really like the emphasis you put ...Hey Mackenzie! I really like the emphasis you put on stanza 3, you made sure the feeling of his experience was nerve-racking. Throughout the poem I noticed the relationship you created between you and Philippe, which I enjoyed reading. Great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16614034576257549277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8125665695553174004.post-15466160117835786712014-09-11T09:04:01.888-07:002014-09-11T09:04:01.888-07:00I really liked how you talked about how inspiring ...I really liked how you talked about how inspiring you feel like Philippe is in your paragraph. It made me excited to read your poem. Your poem is awesome too. I love how you start it with the part about him getting off the subway. It tells the story so clear and good and makes me understand your thought process.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11437596325176290599noreply@blogger.com